Poem written:I Waited for him )=

**staRINN** · 22-10-2007, 01:28 PM

This is a poem i written for him. We quarrelled and i decided to buy him breakfast to reduce his anger. and i waited an hr plus before he turn up. hais!!!

1 hour 05 minutes

It was a rainy morning,
I stood there waiting for him with breakfast,
Watched the rain started and stopped,
My heart never ever felt that uncertain before.

Looking at the birds chirping and playing in the rain,
Feeling my hair brushing against my face as they sway with the wind,
Breathing in the raw whiff of the rain,
I never ever had so much patience before.

Standing there quietly,
Listening to the songs that were playing,
They completely enunciated all my feelings,
Chinese songs never ever sounded that lovely before.

I'm not that as poetic as he is,
But this is best that i can give,
Even if his breakfast becomes dinner or even supper,
I will never ever be so willing to wait before.

An hour and five minutes,
I turned and there he was,
We walked towards each other,
My heart never ever smiled that certain before.

**sychai** · 23-10-2007, 06:01 PM

wah so touch..
can i have ur breakfast too??

**staRINN** · 23-10-2007, 06:03 PM

	Quote:			Originally Posted by sychai
	wah so touch.. can i have ur breakfast too??

you stay too far. lol

**sychai** · 23-10-2007, 09:01 PM

wah u reply very fast hor...

nvm i work in yishun... nearer
hehehe

**ahhuii91** · 23-10-2007, 09:55 PM

good poem ^^ starting it sound a little lonely but ending part much better ^^ good job

**boyusflare** · 23-10-2007, 10:59 PM

nice poem, rather inspiring, like normal happenings can be put into feelings of new hope, new begining ( thats what i felt when i read it! ). Nice one ^^

**staRINN** · 23-10-2007, 11:12 PM

	Quote:			Originally Posted by boyusflare
	nice poem, rather inspiring, like normal happenings can be put into feelings of new hope, new begining ( thats what i felt when i read it! ). Nice one ^^

thanks sniff sniff. ya. i observe my surounding for that one hr. (=
btw i like your drawings.

**boyusflare** · 23-10-2007, 11:26 PM

well hope you and ur bf will be happy together down the years to come

and thank you also

**staRINN** · 23-10-2007, 11:35 PM

	Quote:			Originally Posted by boyusflare
	well hope you and ur bf will be happy together down the years to come and thank you also

lol. he wasn't my bf, never was. we never got a chance to be together.
now he got gf already.

**boyusflare** · 23-10-2007, 11:42 PM

o sry, my bad.. well then hope that if you have a bf now you both will be happy together.. hope i don't say anything wrong this time round! >.<

**staRINN** · 23-10-2007, 11:53 PM

	Quote:			Originally Posted by boyusflare
	o sry, my bad.. well then hope that if you have a bf now you both will be happy together.. hope i don't say anything wrong this time round! >.<

nope. (= same goes to you!!!

**Jiamin_92** · 25-10-2007, 09:43 PM

good one!

22-10-2007, 01:28 PM	#1 (permalink)
staRINN boom!! Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 895 iTrader: (0) My Mood: Gender: Zodiac Sign: Country: Location: Tampines SGC$: 656.55 Bank: 0.00 Total SGC$: 656.55	Poem written:I Waited for him )= This is a poem i written for him. We quarrelled and i decided to buy him breakfast to reduce his anger. and i waited an hr plus before he turn up. hais!!! 1 hour 05 minutes It was a rainy morning, I stood there waiting for him with breakfast, Watched the rain started and stopped, My heart never ever felt that uncertain before. Looking at the birds chirping and playing in the rain, Feeling my hair brushing against my face as they sway with the wind, Breathing in the raw whiff of the rain, I never ever had so much patience before. Standing there quietly, Listening to the songs that were playing, They completely enunciated all my feelings, Chinese songs never ever sounded that lovely before. I'm not that as poetic as he is, But this is best that i can give, Even if his breakfast becomes dinner or even supper, I will never ever be so willing to wait before. An hour and five minutes, I turned and there he was, We walked towards each other, My heart never ever smiled that certain before. *To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.* Last edited by staRINN : 02-11-2007 at 01:36 PM. Reason: LOL!! MISSING WORD!!

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