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31-10-2007, 09:45 PM
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| Registered Members  Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 18 iTrader: (0) Gender:  Zodiac Sign:  Country:  Location: Bedok
SGC$: 22.70 Bank: 0.00 Total SGC$: 22.70 |  Please comment hi all im fresh and new to writing poems.. but wuld still like for comments regarding the poems i hve written.. Goodbye One word, seven letters to break my heart Same word you said to me, when we fell apart Yet now without a word, you choose to go One word was all i wish you told One glance and the moment flashes by One look and i see the loneliness in your eye Yet now without a word you choose to go One tear, i wish that you could know One word that made me cry But i wished you told me, goodbye this poem, i wrote for specific reasons.. how abt you guys guess? bt pls do not forget to comment =) thanx :biggrin4: Last edited by Fly4eva : 31-10-2007 at 09:46 PM. |
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01-11-2007, 08:05 PM
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| 那一夜   Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 2,150 iTrader: (0) My Mood:  Gender:  Zodiac Sign:  Country: Location: Jurong East
SGC$: 413.40 Bank: 1,046.28 Total SGC$: 1,459.68                   | Re: Please comment good one. not bad eh! haha. let me guess. your love one left you without a goodbye?  Visit my blog at To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. :biggrin4: BEAR BEAR FAMILY TREE CLUB Jiamin_92 aka Retarded Retard Bear Bear |
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04-11-2007, 08:16 PM
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| Registered Members Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 18 iTrader: (0) Gender: Zodiac Sign: Country: Location: Bedok
SGC$: 22.70 Bank: 0.00 Total SGC$: 22.70 | Re: Please comment er... nt mine.. haha.. jus an experience of my fren's... i jus wrote the poem to express how my fren felt.. |
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