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19-03-2007, 11:41 PM
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The teacher came into class one day giving all her 10 year olds a chance to do some creative writing. She told them to write about anything at all, but her only criteria was that it had to be at least 500 words long.
Little Johnny started to write his essay, "The Day I Lost My Puppy":
"One day, my mommy and daddy bought me a little puppy to play with. However, I accidentally left the gate open and my puppy ran out. I went out of my house and started shouting, 'Puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy puppy.’ Then my puppy showed up and I brought him home!”
His composition had 504 words.  - Sebby
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20-03-2007, 12:02 AM
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20-03-2007, 12:03 AM
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OWNAGE LOL i wonder what the teacher say!!!
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20-03-2007, 01:37 AM
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 if nxt time my children oso like tis i will faint lor >.< | |
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20-03-2007, 01:51 AM
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20-03-2007, 01:58 AM
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Puppy Love???
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20-03-2007, 03:06 AM
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"As much as I admire your love for your puppy, the way you express it is not enough for me to justify giving you a pass for this."
- what I would comment, if I were the teacher
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20-03-2007, 10:59 AM
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i duno whether to say the kid "creative" or "stewpid" !~.. :disgust2: | |
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20-03-2007, 11:04 AM
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straightaway.. FAIL! ("v")Apple("v") To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. | |
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20-03-2007, 11:14 AM
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 funny assay. bt make sense.. if dun continue shouting, the puppy wont cum back ar.. muhahahaha... Bear Bear Family Tree Club
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20-03-2007, 02:47 PM
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lol~ the version i saw was a kitten which the kid called it kitty.. Bear Bear Family Tree Club Executive Team Member = Bubbly Bear Bear To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. | |
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20-03-2007, 03:01 PM
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20-03-2007, 03:05 PM
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haha. cute child! the innocence of a child can be so hilarious. lol. | |
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20-03-2007, 11:56 PM
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lolx. wonder how many marks he'll get hahax To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. | |
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i wOnder If any kId reAlly dId thIs kInd of essAy... sO cute.. Haha. | |
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