retxxter

Recently I took some freelance back. Cause I just wanna try out something new. So I did this B5 mag ad under two bands called The Click Five and White Stripes. Attached was one of the band.



Then I took some of the movies ad to go back home to do. I did Rush Hour 3 and Transformer. The 1st visual for Rush Hour 3 was like this:-


Then Got REJECTED! Haiz... She told me to follow the poster one. But I didnt received any poster, So I dont know how's the flowing is like. Then she send to me the poster and told me - if can follow the feel of the poster. Like one range type. So, the poster look like this:-


And I did this for her:-


Haha.. Then, my transformer ad is like this:-


Just wanna hear comments from u guys, so i can improve more on my work. :mellow3:

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boyusflare

the rush hour 3 is good, like how they both point thier fingers and the background is ok. but for the transformers, i think it has strong dark colours, but maybe you can do the colours brighter contrast so as to attract more viewers. even so its nice i'll just shut up coz i can't really phrase out what i feel as yet lol. but they're good

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★Yuuko☆

omg u did these posters!??! AMAZING. its really good, but the transformers is abit messy though. but still nice. same as boyusflare, i liked the 3rd rush hour 3 the most.

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Shyraiiyann

er, typography?
esp in the first.

great job!

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andri_asoy

woow...creative!!!!!hehehe..cool...

yup same like the others....the Rush Hours 3 poster is the best...

retxxter

ohh..thanks thanks for those comments ohh..

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seacsub

Hey, not bad. Just wanna pick your brain for a sec but how and where do you get ideas for the design. It really does look great. :rock:

retxxter

I'm actually a graphic designer ya. That's my job..hehe..but i just wan to expose and see more things in design.

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crappyguy

did u really did do poster?...is excellent work...
wad software did u use ar?...
cause i'm olso into design too!!!

retxxter

photoshop and illustrator cs, merging and effect is in photoshop de..

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xieBin

great job! they're good! i studied design last year!

secrets

it's nice. except the 1st rush hour 3.. jacky chan's face is cropped in a very weird manner..

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DINEy

yea, the rejected rush hour 3 not nice.
hah, the rest, i would say it's great.

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stelart

professional
looks quite good
maybe u should have more new n unique idea

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St.

one thing about poster...

no one bothers to read lots of text. synopsis on poster? you hit a wrong button. if you want to tell what it is about, try to explain in 4 short sentences, and leave some curiosity... even it could kill cats, it's the power or marketing.

retxxter

err.. haha. Actually, I've stated in the 1st paragraph saying it was an ad. Mag Ad b5 size. I dunno who started mention as poster and everyone run it as a poster. It's not a poster ar... :biggrin4:

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retxxter

Then, I did the preview of the packaging, to let you all feel. Cuz open size of the packaging and the packaging itself will come out different feel de.

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