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Old 20-10-2007, 10:09 PM   #1 (permalink)
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思念一個人的時候寫的...他總是突然消失. 或許是一場遠距離的戀愛.
不容易..不過我會加油~^_^ 希望他也會....


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詞:詩意

我在車里 隔著玻璃 滴答的雨滴
灑落窗前 隨風改變 成無型的痕跡
就像我現在的心情
那麼不確定
偶 爾也會 失 去方向 該 如何面對

很想靜靜 我陪自己 看一場電影
感覺依舊 那麼熟悉 卻少了一個你
螢幕前 灯光很刺眼
悲傷更明顯
在我很想你的時候
真的需要勇氣

我在這裡
你卻無聲無息
你讓我自由 卻沒發現 你的成全 換來眼淚 
你在哪裡 
 
受傷的心 時間來醫 會漸漸痊癒
整個旅程 我一個人又 了解到甚麼
讓我從失戀中領略 相愛的幸福
總有一天 我會看見彩虹微笑的臉

我在這裡
你卻無聲無息
你讓我自由 卻沒發現 你的成全 換來眼淚 
不再想你 
(我好像斷了 線的風箏 隨風而行 漫無目的
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Old 23-10-2007, 09:36 AM   #2 (permalink)
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very nice =) hmmm coz have rhyme de =) heee
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Old 25-10-2007, 09:36 PM   #3 (permalink)
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thank you! ^_^ have rhyme den easy to sing ..hehe
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omg! nice one! I do write lyrics but mine not as beautiful as yours.

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^_^ thanks!
writing lyrics is just like writing a story. 1st 2nd verse, there need to be 畫面感,followed by the chorus which is the main objective you wanna bring out. In a song, flow is very important and it will be better if the words rhyme~

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^_^ thanks!
writing lyrics is just like writing a story. 1st 2nd verse, there need to be 畫面感,followed by the chorus which is the main objective you wanna bring out. In a song, flow is very important and it will be better if the words rhyme~

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thx. effective guidelines. Look at some of my songs too and give me some comments will ya? thx.

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