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**lsycinderalla** · 20-10-2007, 10:09 PM

思念一個人的時候寫的...他總是突然消失. 或許是一場遠距離的戀愛.
不容易..不過我會加油~^_^ 希望他也會....

曲：
詞：詩意

我在車里隔著玻璃滴答的雨滴
灑落窗前隨風改變成無型的痕跡
就像我現在的心情
那麼不確定
偶爾也會失去方向該如何面對

很想靜靜我陪自己看一場電影
感覺依舊那麼熟悉卻少了一個你
螢幕前灯光很刺眼
悲傷更明顯
在我很想你的時候
真的需要勇氣

我在這裡
你卻無聲無息
你讓我自由卻沒發現你的成全換來眼淚　
你在哪裡　
　
受傷的心時間來醫會漸漸痊癒
整個旅程我一個人又了解到甚麼
讓我從失戀中領略相愛的幸福
總有一天　我會看見彩虹微笑的臉

我在這裡
你卻無聲無息
你讓我自由卻沒發現你的成全換來眼淚　
不再想你　
(我好像斷了線的風箏隨風而行漫無目的
離開了你)　　

**tear** · 23-10-2007, 09:36 AM

very nice =) hmmm coz have rhyme de =) heee

**lsycinderalla** · 25-10-2007, 09:36 PM

thank you! ^_^ have rhyme den easy to sing ..hehe

**PassionSwirls** · 25-10-2007, 09:39 PM

omg! nice one! I do write lyrics but mine not as beautiful as yours.

**lsycinderalla** · 25-10-2007, 09:43 PM

^_^ thanks!
writing lyrics is just like writing a story. 1st 2nd verse, there need to be 畫面感,followed by the chorus which is the main objective you wanna bring out. In a song, flow is very important and it will be better if the words rhyme~

加油! ^_^

**PassionSwirls** · 25-10-2007, 09:47 PM

	Quote:			Originally Posted by lsycinderalla
	^_^ thanks! writing lyrics is just like writing a story. 1st 2nd verse, there need to be 畫面感,followed by the chorus which is the main objective you wanna bring out. In a song, flow is very important and it will be better if the words rhyme~ 加油! ^_^

thx. effective guidelines. Look at some of my songs too and give me some comments will ya? thx.