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**Fly4eva** · 31-10-2007, 09:45 PM

hi all
im fresh and new to writing poems.. but wuld still like for comments regarding the poems i hve written..

Goodbye
One word, seven letters to break my heart
Same word you said to me, when we fell apart
Yet now without a word, you choose to go
One word was all i wish you told
One glance and the moment flashes by
One look and i see the loneliness in your eye
Yet now without a word you choose to go
One tear, i wish that you could know
One word that made me cry
But i wished you told me, goodbye

this poem, i wrote for specific reasons.. how abt you guys guess?
bt pls do not forget to comment =) thanx

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31-10-2007, 09:45 PM	#1 (permalink)
Fly4eva Registered Members Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 18 iTrader: (0) Gender: Zodiac Sign: Country: Location: Bedok SGC$: 22.70 Bank: 0.00 Total SGC$: 22.70	Please comment hi all im fresh and new to writing poems.. but wuld still like for comments regarding the poems i hve written.. Goodbye One word, seven letters to break my heart Same word you said to me, when we fell apart Yet now without a word, you choose to go One word was all i wish you told One glance and the moment flashes by One look and i see the loneliness in your eye Yet now without a word you choose to go One tear, i wish that you could know One word that made me cry But i wished you told me, goodbye this poem, i wrote for specific reasons.. how abt you guys guess? bt pls do not forget to comment =) thanx :biggrin4: Last edited by Fly4eva : 31-10-2007 at 09:46 PM.